A very good remix =D
*Turns up volume*
I really like the version of this track that you've done! It is generally well structured and the use of the vocals are great.
Not to be picky or complaintative however, I have quite a few things that I would like to point out:
The piano and strings sound like they have really been messed about with by a Timestretcher, much like the effect you get on Windows Media Player if you increase the play speed on that. That could do with a readjustment.
The kick drum is also very hidden amongst all the vocals and other drums, so I would suggest that you up the gain and compress it so that it bangs through every other sound without distrupting them. You could also do with giving the bass such characteristics to give the song a bit more balance.
There seems to be NO lead synth in the song, only pianos, strings and the vocals. To make this song totally epic, you need a good, fat arpeggio in with the vocals and in between vocal placements to fill it up a bit more (arpeggios are always an excellent choice =D).
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That's it really. Sorry if I sound like I'm complaining, especially about stuff that may just be YOUR style. This really is a great remix.
Well done on this! =)
P.S. Check out my other songs =D
8= DJ-I =8